What do you think of my friend's poem?

I love it, it's one of the best I am poems I've ever written. (Oh and to the guy who said your friend was self centered for writing this, it's a form of poetry and it's suppose to have a lot Is in it. Maybe you should learn about poetry before you try to mock the people to write it.) We had to write poems like that for school but none of them were that good. I really loved it. If I as your friend I'd try to get it published.